Rejected Appledestroyer Sky Island parkour map

[Appledestroyer]

Username:Appledestroyer
Difficulty:easy
Theme:Sky Island
Just do /plot home Appledestroyer or-1967 71 1740
Replace all the the signs that wrote checkpoint
The barrier blocks I placed are to refrain people from cheating The course.
The maps quite short(Lel only 20 jumps) but nice.
Also this was a solo build,Only Appledestroyer helped aka me
[DOUBLEPOST=1511411851][/DOUBLEPOST]Also for checkpoints by replace i meant by you can put the checkpoint anywhere

 

[Appledestroyer]

The map is pretty easy but the last section for some reason is terrible

 

[Its_Donut]

Hi ! i really like this map, but one thing it is a little confusing to know where to jump exactly but other than that great job on the map.

 

[Txilsy]

Helloo,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

The theme you've used isn't the most original. Make sure to have this though, as it will increase the likeliness to get accepted, considering it would be boring to have the same theme over and over again. The amount of jumps do suit the difficulty, but I'd still say to have more variety spread out all around the course. Also work to have a nicer build, as it doesn't look too appealing right now.

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one.
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.

Submission format: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
List of current maps/themes: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/#post-73063
Map difficulty guide: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/map-difficulty-guide.16797/