Rejected Eiffel Tower// Hard

[ReaperYTOfficial]

Hello Citizens of Manacube/Minevast! I hope your feeling good today because I have a map submission for you guys! please have a visit and see if you like it or not!

Checkpoints- 4
Jumps:36 (They are hard trust me)
Tester: Ayatou
Creator- ReaperYTOfficial
Difficulty- Hard
How to get there- /Plot h ReaperYTOfficial 5
Pictures below! <3

 

[Raceh]

Nice Map! Good luck!!

 

[ReaperYTOfficial]

Nice Map! Good luck!!

Thank you so much

 

[Shinxray]

Review :
Positives points :
-The theme is pretty original.
-Looks goo.. wait I heard a very angry french man D:

Spoiler: thi iss sso uglyy boi why :'(

Thi Eifel Twer in brics ..... In BrIcS ???!!!??!
WhYYYYY !!!!??? ItS An IRoNe BuLDingu iTs nOTt Lik TiS !!:!!::!!!
ThIs iSe aNn IrONe bare :

aNdd Thi Ise a BrICs :

AnDe tH EifEL ToWEr loOk liK thI :

ItSSsS NOOtttt BrIICCCSSss MmmMaA boOiiIiII !!!!!!!:!:!!!:!!!


Ok I'm going to far away lo, looks good c:

-The build fit with the theme.

Negatives points :
-34 jumps is really short for a Hard Parkour.
-You said there is hard jump on your parkour but appart 1 or 2 jumps, Your parkour is really easy (Maybe Medium parkour ?).
-There is some variety of jump but I think there is to many normal jump, so try to had ice or soul sand c:


My opinion :
I don't really know if it's gonna be accepted, the build looks good but the parkour himself need to be improve.

I hope I help you c:

 

[ReaperYTOfficial]

Review :
Positives points :
-The theme is pretty original.
-Looks goo.. wait I heard a very angry french man D:

Spoiler: thi iss sso uglyy boi why :'(

Thi Eifel Twer in brics ..... In BrIcS ???!!!??!
WhYYYYY !!!!??? ItS An IRoNe BuLDingu iTs nOTt Lik TiS !!:!!::!!!
ThIs iSe aNn IrONe bare :

aNdd Thi Ise a BrICs :

AnDe tH EifEL ToWEr loOk liK thI :

ItSSsS NOOtttt BrIICCCSSss MmmMaA boOiiIiII !!!!!!!:!:!!!:!!!


Ok I'm going to far away lo, looks good c:

-The build fit with the theme.

Negatives points :
-34 jumps is really short for a Hard Parkour.
-You said there is hard jump on your parkour but appart 1 or 2 jumps, Your parkour is really easy (Maybe Medium parkour ?).
-There is some variety of jump but I think there is to many normal jump, so try to had ice or soul sand c:


My opinion :
I don't really know if it's gonna be accepted, the build looks good but the parkour himself need to be improve.

I hope I help you c:

I thought that the bricks fit the them I also thought that the jumps were hard enough to fit the hard difficulty

 

[Codiing]

I'll do the parkour and do an "Edit" here.

EDIT: I've completed the Parkour, only took about maybe 2-3 minutes. These are my statistics:

Positive Feedback:​

• Far jumps
• Creative Parkour
• Good structure of a PK map

Negative Feedback:

• Short Parkour
• Water bit is really easy,

• Kind of confusing with the ladders inside.

Constructive Criticism: ​

All-in-all, pretty good map, good job with it. Just add a tiny bit more detail, a bit bit longer and change up the water a tiny bit. If you were able to do that, I would class this as a "Hard" map! Good luck man, have a good one!

 

[Txilsy]

Hello Sam,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

Your map has an original theme, I have to give you that. The structure does represent the theme nicely, though I have to agree with @Shinxray his great angry french man impression, I do not exactly get why you would use bricks. You have been improving in your map making skill however. The jumps, I'd call it a medium course, with exception of the neo. Why it's a medium course for me is because of the type of jumps, they are fairly easy, especially the water ones. It is quite short as well. You have to find the balance between these aspects to really have your map be a certain difficulty. Maybe give yourself more space to work with in the future, so you can have more complicated/interesting yet fun jumps.

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one.

Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.