"I have no intentions to be rude, and toxic" Well if you have no intentions to be rude and toxic, don't make the post. Honestly, if your saying "This literally looks like 2nd grade writing" thats kind of rude and your telling us you are not being rude. I am done seeing comments like this as it gets on my nervers. I think that you are treating this application like it's shitty and not needed. Maybe saying "-1, your application is lack of detail" <-- (not that its lack of detial, just a reason that would actually help staff). You don't have to go deep into it. I think you need to grow up and don't come in here saying that she's not mature, because I think she is mature, your probally not mature.