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- Thread starter Squiggles765
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Hey man! I like your map. But, there are just a few problems so let's review!
Pros:
- You made sure to block off any shortcuts
- The quality of the builds aren't TOO bad (Even though they may need to be revamped)
- There's a nice variety of jumps
- The summer parkour was very nice, I liked the way you made the ladders on the vines. I really enjoyed that part
Cons:
- Unfortunately, map's difficulty are judged by number of jumps AND difficulty of jumps. Right now, it seems like it's a super long easy course
- The quality of the floating islands are bad (Sorry, but they look like upside-down Mount Fujis)
- Sometimes your jumps were a little bit repetitive (For example, the part going from spring into summer where there were like 10 water jumps)
- There's an impossible jump, the one where you jump off of the water and into summer. It might seem possible from looking at it, but you try it!
- Sometimes it's good to build things according to scale. The snowman is a little bit too big for its surroundings.
Cool map, man! Just a few fixes, but you have a great start!
Pros:
- You made sure to block off any shortcuts
- The quality of the builds aren't TOO bad (Even though they may need to be revamped)
- There's a nice variety of jumps
- The summer parkour was very nice, I liked the way you made the ladders on the vines. I really enjoyed that part
Cons:
- Unfortunately, map's difficulty are judged by number of jumps AND difficulty of jumps. Right now, it seems like it's a super long easy course
- The quality of the floating islands are bad (Sorry, but they look like upside-down Mount Fujis)
- Sometimes your jumps were a little bit repetitive (For example, the part going from spring into summer where there were like 10 water jumps)
- There's an impossible jump, the one where you jump off of the water and into summer. It might seem possible from looking at it, but you try it!
- Sometimes it's good to build things according to scale. The snowman is a little bit too big for its surroundings.
Cool map, man! Just a few fixes, but you have a great start!
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Hey man! I like your map. But, there are just a few problems so let's review!
Pros:
- You made sure to block off any shortcuts
- The quality of the builds aren't TOO bad (Even though they may need to be revamped)
- There's a nice variety of jumps
- The summer parkour was very nice, I liked the way you made the ladders on the vines. I really enjoyed that part
Cons:
- Unfortunately, map's difficulty are judged by number of jumps AND difficulty of jumps. Right now, it seems like it's a super long easy course
- The quality of the floating islands are bad (Sorry, but they look like upside-down Mount Fujis)
- Sometimes your jumps were a little bit repetitive (For example, the part going from spring into summer where there were like 10 water jumps)
- There's an impossible jump, the one where you jump off of the water and into summer. It might seem possible from looking at it, but you try it!
- Sometimes it's good to build things according to scale. The snowman is a little bit too big for its surroundings.
Cool map, man! Just a few fixes, but you have a great start!
Pros:
- You made sure to block off any shortcuts
- The quality of the builds aren't TOO bad (Even though they may need to be revamped)
- There's a nice variety of jumps
- The summer parkour was very nice, I liked the way you made the ladders on the vines. I really enjoyed that part
Cons:
- Unfortunately, map's difficulty are judged by number of jumps AND difficulty of jumps. Right now, it seems like it's a super long easy course
- The quality of the floating islands are bad (Sorry, but they look like upside-down Mount Fujis)
- Sometimes your jumps were a little bit repetitive (For example, the part going from spring into summer where there were like 10 water jumps)
- There's an impossible jump, the one where you jump off of the water and into summer. It might seem possible from looking at it, but you try it!
- Sometimes it's good to build things according to scale. The snowman is a little bit too big for its surroundings.
Cool map, man! Just a few fixes, but you have a great start!
Hey Squiggles765,
I am sorry to tell you, but I am going to reject this map.
This theme is really overused, the jumps are sometimes a little bit repetitive and all the floating blocks, fences and other items just do not look appealing at all. Also this map is just a really long easy course, which makes it less fun to play.
Thanks for submitting this map and I hope to see more in the future!
Shron
I am sorry to tell you, but I am going to reject this map.
This theme is really overused, the jumps are sometimes a little bit repetitive and all the floating blocks, fences and other items just do not look appealing at all. Also this map is just a really long easy course, which makes it less fun to play.
Thanks for submitting this map and I hope to see more in the future!
Shron
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