Rejected Another War.... ( made in 6H )

[Ikyoz_On_Youtube/Drowney]

Builder & plot owner : Ikyoz_On_Youtube
Tester : D4rkCuby & Ikyoz_On_Youtube
Map name : Another War
Jumps ( no fail ) : 78-80 ( there are 2 ways to finish )
Checkpoints : 4 regulars checkpoints
No shortcuts ( tested 10 times )
Difficulty Easy to Normal
Theme : World War II
Plot ID : -42;-49
No pixelarts
My map is large but i think u can add it ( example : Steve VS Skeleton is really large )

BONUS :

There are 5 secret heads , u can try to find them if u want .
There are credits
There is a " scenario "
There is an 3D AK-47 build ( it took 6H to build in details )
There are Dead soldiers ( u will understand y trying the map )
I asked for validating a map but this one have been denied
This map represent really a lot of time


I know , my presentation is not very long like others , but i'ts 02:00 AM right now here , i'm really sorry for that




SCREENSHOTS :

 

[Dubinzi]

Giving this a -1

Negatives that matter in terms of the map getting accepted:

• This parkour is too long for Easy / Medium, but is too easy for Hard, do it doesn't fit into a difficulty very well
• The build of the AK-47 is just ok
• The parkour is not varied, there are many repeated jumps (head jumps, fence jumps, ladder tower, etc)
• The ending was confusing and it was unclear that you had to jump into the hole to finish the course
• The only thing that would define this map's theme as World War 2 would be the heads inside of the gun, but unforunately I don't think that's enough to say this is an all-encompassing WW2 map. I think AK-47 would be just fine as a map name for this

Negatives that don't affect whether or not the map is accepted:

• I find it extremely hard to believe that this took six hours to build with two people
• For that same reason, maybe saying "Made in six hours" at the start of the map is not a smart idea
• The sign at the start says D4rk is a builder, while the credits at the end says D4rk is a tester. This is important in deciding whether or not D4rk gets a map credit if this is accepted, so you should make his role consistent to avoid confusion.

Suggestions:

• Make the jumps harder and more varied, and change this to a hard difficulty
• Rename the map to AK-47
• Add a sign at the end telling them to jump in the hole to finish

Good luck!

 

[Ikyoz_On_Youtube/Drowney]

I modified everything , can you look at my new jumps ?

 

[Dubinzi]

Good improvements made. +1.
Also there is an impossible jump (without speed) here: http://prntscr.com/nqp065

 

[Ikyoz_On_Youtube/Drowney]

ow... really ? i will change it

 

[Ikyoz_On_Youtube/Drowney]

changed , i wait for a possibly validation

 

[Sketchinqq]

Heyoo, i checked out your map and the theme is original, the build is pretty decent, and from what i can see the parkour is a little repetative but good. Ill give it a +1!
Best of luck ❤

 

[Ikyoz_On_Youtube/Drowney]

Heyoo, i checked out your map and the theme is original, the build is pretty decent, and from what i can see the parkour is a little repetative but good. Ill give it a +1!
Best of luck ❤

Thank you so much

 

[lavabunny]

Builder & plot owner : Ikyoz_On_Youtube
Tester : D4rkCuby & Ikyoz_On_Youtube
Map name : Another War
Jumps ( no fail ) : 78-80 ( there are 2 ways to finish )
Checkpoints : 4 regulars checkpoints
No shortcuts ( tested 10 times )
Difficulty Easy to Normal
Theme : World War II
Plot ID : -42;-49
No pixelarts
My map is large but i think u can add it ( example : Steve VS Skeleton is really large )

BONUS :

There are 5 secret heads , u can try to find them if u want .
There are credits
There is a " scenario "
There is an 3D AK-47 build ( it took 6H to build in details )
There are Dead soldiers ( u will understand y trying the map )
I asked for validating a map but this one have been denied
This map represent really a lot of time


I know , my presentation is not very long like others , but i'ts 02:00 AM right now here , i'm really sorry for that




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Sorry mate I'll give it a -1 only based off the pictures I'm looking at though

 

[AlfieJay]

Hey Ikyoz_On_Youtube

Unfortunately your submissions has been REJECTED. The build is quite unappealing and the parkour is too difficult for an easy or a medium map. However the parkour is varied and the theme is unique. Thanks for submitting your map and I'd love to see some more submissions from you in the future