Rejected Parkour Submission ( meduim)

[MrSnailGaming]

Theme: Bedwars!
Creator of map: MrSnailGaming
Plot: /plot visit MrSnailGaming 2
Difficulty: Meduim (or hard)
Extra notes:I have made one but an admin said to add more detail so I listened to him .
Photos:

 

[Skolyx78]

Not bad! The theme is original and I can confirm there is no other bedwars maps or Hypixel games maps. The difficulty is medium because the jumps are medium and the number of jumps is 53. You forgot to put a checkpoint at the beginning and to put a yellow block under the pressure plate. You could also add some variety to your jumps ex: ice, soul sand and slime.

 

[lolol]

Oooh, nice! Would love to see this one in-game! If there's voting, I give a +1

 

[Aloro]

In wrong place//Moving

 

[Aloro]

Hey Snail,
I am sorry to say, but I am going to be rejecting your map submission.
Firstly, the 'Bedwars' aspect of the map is original, but when looking at the whole map it just looks like most of the floating island maps we already have. The map does have a nice amount of jumps but I believe they could have been incorporated into the build a bit better. As for the whole build, the islands get a little boring as they have just been world edited throughout the map.
I thank you for your map submission, I hope to see more in the near future!

- Aloro/Toby