Rejected Lily Pond by Trein03, and RwbyR0se

[Trein03]

Username: Trein03, RwbyR0se
Warp: /plot visit Trein03 or #-27;34
Difficulty: Hard
Jumps: 77(a couple checkpoints)
Shoutout to: RwbyR0se for helping me on with this.

This is my second map, it is a lot better than my first one. I hope you enjoy it.

I will post a link to the images.
[DOUBLEPOST=1518940743][/DOUBLEPOST]Link to images: https://imgur.com/a/B8pM6

 

[Aloro]

Hey Trien,
I am sorry to say but I am going to be rejecting this map submission.
Firstly, I like the flower in the middle of the map as it looks nice and fits with the theme. However, the rest of the map does not look too appealing, for example, the jumps are just floating instead of being incorporated into the build. I do like the jumps though because they have some variation on the map.
Thank you for submitting a map, I hope to see more in the near future!

- Aloro/Toby