Rejected Back To The Future - Medium/Hard

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Capsicum

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  • Username: Capsicum
  • Map name: "Back To The Future"
  • Photos of your Parkour:
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  • The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: ./plot tp Capsicum
  • Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane): Medium/Hard.
 

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+1 Beautiful Build, and you have a very nice variety of jumps!
 

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Hello Capsicum,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, and the build is really good. It has a lot of detail and I can tell you've put a lot of time and effort into it, so well done!
The parkour is quite repetitive. You did use a variety of jump styles, however there are a few sections that were very repetitive. For a map of that length, I would suggest trying to make the jumps a little more varied, as you did use a lot of trapdoors, normal blocks and fences. Also try to avoid grouping jumps too much, what I mean by this is that there were some parts that were a sequence of just fences, then just heads, then trapdoors etc, so trying to space out and mix up the jumps more.
A lot of the parkour is floating. Having a lot of floating jumps can make the map overall quite messy, try to implement the jumps into the build more.
You did use a lot of barriers, try to avoid using too many barriers where possible, since this can make the map quite confusing, and also look a bit messy.
The difficulty suits a medium/hard map, and the length suits an expert map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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