Rejected Beat

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(based on the character Beat from the game Jet Set Radio)
Username: MCBYT
Map Name: "Beat"
/plot h MCBYT 6
Expert map.

87 jumps.

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As this is the first expert map I've built, and I've only played 3 expert maps by other players, there might be a few issues with this. The parkour isn't the most unique in the entire world, although I did try to add interesting jumps. It's also got a lot of vines and ladders; I'll see what I can do to remove some of these to make it a bit more varied. I would've done that before submitting, but for some reason, my internet is kicking me from the server every few minutes.​
 

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pleassse replace the sandstone with white stained clay
 

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-1 theme is unoriginal as there is already a beats/headphones map on medium or hard, I don't remember the difficulty though.
 

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-1 theme is unoriginal as there is already a beats/headphones map on medium or hard, I don't remember the difficulty though.
This is based on a character named Beat, not the headphones (which take up like 5-10% of the map and have 1 jump on them)
 

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Hello MCBYT,

Unfortunately I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, and the build is accurate and well done.
The parkour has good jump variation, however I felt as the difficulty of the jumps wasn't very consistent. There were a few parts that felt as if they were too easy for an expert, and some that were too hard for an expert.
I also found the map quite confusing, I would suggest adding more signs indicating where to go, as well as using something such as different coloured carpets in areas.
The length is good for an expert map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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