Confinement / Hard (Rejected by myself)

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  1. Deeeeeep

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    * This map no longer exist on my plot. Please close this thread *


    Username: Deeeeeep
    Map name: Confinement

    This map takes the theme of confinement (even though the parkour operates in void), so the course takes a rather simple building style.

    Plot id: -46;-41 or /plot v Deeeeeep
    Difficulty: Hard
    Number of checkpoints: 3
    Number of jumps: Around 90, but the map itself isn't that lengthy (the jumps that are not significant are made easy)


    Photos:

    Overview:
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    Part 1:
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    Part 2:
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    (Revamped in the newer design)
    Part 3:
    (exterior)
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    Most jumps are hidden in the interior
    Part 4:
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    With some hard neo jumps


    (I had some slight decorative changes after taking the screenshots, so the actual map looks slightly different)
     
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    Last edited: Jun 17, 2018 at 9:41 PM
  2. ~3G

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    I love the idea and the execution on this map. The block choice I think could be changed up slightly, but other than that it looks like something I would love to have a go at! Also, a theme would be nice or maybe making it look like something recognizable. (e.g. compact it into a building that looks like a prison etc.)
     
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  3. SleepyDiva

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    Hi there,
    First of all, I really like the theme of this map, it is original as I cannot recall seeing a map with the same/similar theme, but I feel as through you have not executed it in the best way possible. Moreover, the map overall looks a little messy, but I understand that is due to the theming of the map. Furthermore, from the photos you have provided, I cannot see a huge variety of jumps, but the parkour does look fun to do, although I have not tested it. 0

    Good luck,
    Allie
     
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  4. Deeeeeep

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    Some of your points are true. However, for the variety of jumps, I believe that I have included a lot of different jumps that can fit in the theme well. The problem should be that most jumps are hidden behind the iron bars, so you may have to go inside and take a look.
     
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  5. SleepyDiva

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    Ah right ok, I will definitely have to check out the map next time before I make a judgement.
     
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  6. Deeeeeep

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    [​IMG]
    Revamped some parts so it fits the theme better now
     
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  7. SleepyDiva

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    It looks a lot better than before, and I can tell you have improved it, so I will furthermore be giving this map +0

    Good luck,
    Allie
     
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  8. Deeeeeep

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    Hello guys,

    This is my first map created on this server. I have received quite some feedback (especially negative ones). I admit that the build isn't attractive since the theme was only added after I finished building the parkour. I have also realised that there are too many ladder and iron bars jumps on my parkour, which may be bad for some people.

    I've decided to completely redesign this map while keeping some of its original features. Can an admin help me close this thread?
     
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    Last edited: Jun 17, 2018 at 9:47 PM
  9. KingNoahPlayzMC

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    Deep ill ask a staff to @Speediare bruh fix this
     
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