Rejected Dratini- Easy Map

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Map Name: Dratini
Creator: QueenBugs
Helpers: _Kxll, Spectromaniac, Snowflake287, ItsRainingMen101, Emilsam
Difficulty: Easy
Plot: /plot v QueenBugs
# of Jumps: ~30
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Hi there the build looks decent but is also poorly executed and since its a pokemon, its unoriginal so im gonna give you a -1
 

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Hi there the build looks decent but is also poorly executed and since its a pokemon, its unoriginal so im gonna give you a -1
What could I do to make it look better ?
 

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Hoi QueenBugs,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is not original, because there is already a lot of Pokemon maps, but the way you build it is more original. The build is not really good, I think the Draniti don't really looks attractive, mostly when you watch his body behind his head. The parkour is interesting, it's varied and fun, my only negative point is your easter egg (Mostly the first (?)) make the map confusing.

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !
 
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