Rejected Helicopters / Easy

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/plot visit xX_SacredPvp_Xx 5
Difficulty: Easy
Jumps: 19
Checkpoints: 1
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+0.5. The parkour and build are quite good (from what I can see, I'll get on later to evaluate the parkour as I'm at school currently), but there's already a helicopter map that looks somewhat similar (TheHunt by Tasses).
EDIT: Just rechecked TheHunt and it appears my memory was a bit off. There is still a helicopter in TheHunt, but the map looks very different. New vote is +0.5!
 
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+0. Fits the difficulty of Easy. Some of the jumps are repetitive, but it should be fine since there are only 19 jumps. The theme is slightly unoriginal though, as MCBYT said above. Good luck!
 

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This looks like a really good map! I hope my map that features a helicopter doesn't take away from this. Good luck!
 

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^ Presidenten's from MazeBank
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^ Mine from TheHunt and Apocalypse
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^ Theirs.

They all look very similar. Not a big deal, I don't think. It still looks good.
 

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-1 theres already a map on medium named Aircraft from what I remember
Below shows the pk list with theme stuff...VVV
Aircraft :

Builder : ?

Number of jumps : 49~

Theme : Vehicle + Sky

Place in the log : 1st page, 2nd line, 5th column
 

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-1 theres already a map on medium named Aircraft from what I remember
Below shows the pk list with theme stuff...VVV
Aircraft :

Builder : ?

Number of jumps : 49~

Theme : Vehicle + Sky

Place in the log : 1st page, 2nd line, 5th column
So? That map has an airplane, not a helicopter. The builds are nothing alike.
 

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So? That map has an airplane, not a helicopter. The builds are nothing alike.
It removes a layer of originality (my GameBoy map was denied mostly because there were other game console maps) but I don't think it's a cause for rejection. Having 4 maps with similar builds though would be.
 

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-1 these maps look similar.
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Hello xX_SacredPvp_Xx,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, because as several people pointed out, there are similar helicopter concepts in some of our maps (Aircraft), (Airplane).
The build is accurate and well-done, although it could be better. It looks a bit too simple in my opinion.
The parkour is
varied and it does fit the difficulty very well. There are a few impossible jumps toward the beginning. I will label these for you on your plot! While the parkour is good in terms of difficulty, it looks a bit messy. I think the parkour should be incorporated with the build more!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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