Rejected JumbledJ's Map

[JJ (_ThatGuyJJ_)]

Username: JumbledJ
Map name: KyberCrystalPK
(based off of the crystals that power lightsabers in Star Wars)
Photos of your Parkour:
(Sorry the chat is in the way)

The # of my Plot: I don't know what this means but the id is -85;78
Difficulty: Hard
Number of jumps: 70ish

GL ME

 

[sapqhire]

Hello JumbledJ,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is original, there are a few crystal themed maps already, but no kyber crystal themed maps.
The build isn't bad, it is quite simple and a bit small, but it does look nice.
The parkour is quite repetitive, as a lot of it was normal blocks, with some ladders. Try to experiment with a larger variety of blocks and items when building jumps, this will make your map overall more enjoyable to complete.
Almost all of the parkour was floating. Try to avoid having jumps floating around the build and void, as this can make your map look quite messy, as well as taking away from the main build itself.
The difficulty is good for a medium map and the length is good for a hard map.

I would also like to mention, where you said you don't know what it means by 'The # of your plot' that just means the warp to it, so either the id (which you included) or, in this case, /plot v JumbledJ 2

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.