Jungle Rush - Insane

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  1. BuddyCat38

    BuddyCat38 Member

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    Username: BuddyCat38
    The Map Name: Jungle Rush
    Photos of your parkour:
    upload_2018-7-11_17-46-46.png upload_2018-7-11_17-47-30.png upload_2018-7-11_17-48-10.png upload_2018-7-11_17-48-54.png upload_2018-7-11_17-49-36.png upload_2018-7-11_17-50-18.png upload_2018-7-11_17-50-50.png upload_2018-7-11_17-53-17.png
    The # of your Plot / or warp name to it:
    -48;-20 | /plot visit BuddyCat38 1
    Who helped?: BuddyCat38 and innocient built and tested the parkour course
    Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane): Expert or Insane
    Number of Jumps: 192

    Thank you for your time,
     

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  2. cursedseal

    cursedseal New Member

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    +1, very good and hard map!
     
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  3. BuddyCat38

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    Thank you!
     
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  4. ~3G

    ~3G Active Member

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    This map is excellent. I love the idea of adding in the jungle-temple and those slippery slime-blocks.

    The idea isn't all that original, but I think that it can be overlooked due to the builds and diversity of jumps in the map. I think some more variation could be added, especially with those repetitive jumps in the sky. Since it is an insane, a couple more difficult jumps should be added and maybe some fence/ladder jumps.

    Other than that, I think it will easily be a +0.5 and I'll change this when some of the ideas are incorporated!

    ~3G
     
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  5. ban

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    Amazing job! +1
     
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  6. BuddyCat38

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    thank you so much!
    --- Double Post Merged, Jul 12, 2018 ---
    Yes! I totally agree on all those point, to be completely honest I got a little lazy at the end after hours of building, but I can say that Ive already dealt with the repetitiveness at the end and I just have not re-uploaded the pictures. Thank you so much for your critiques and I will continue to try and improve with future maps and or this one until it gets either accepted, or denied. <3
     
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  7. BuddyCat38

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    Just thought id post a little update to the ending of the parkour. I had got a bit of feedback that it was a little bland with all the repetitive jumps and the lack of diversity here. So I've been changing it up here and I've added a lot more (fences,ladders,icecouple different things) let me know what your think.

    <3
     

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  8. kroro1

    kroro1 Well-Known Member

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    Hello BuddyCat38
    The build itself while built really nicely is just floating islands, which have been done so many times already on this server that the theme is just overused, but I still think it looks quite nice. My main issue with this map is the parkour, 90% is just floating and not used with the build, the parkour also is very repetitive 80% being 3-4 block jumps which I find make the map really tedious. I also think the difficulty would rather be hard than expert but because the map is so long it would be expert again, I find it's too long for it's difficulty. If you would move more parkour to the big Island and make the parkour more Interesting I would gladly give it a +1 but in its current state it's a -1 from me.
    Good Luck anyway :D
     
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  9. BuddyCat38

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    Okay thank you for the advice I understand all of this, and this is my first time making a map after all. But thank you for the advice I appreciate it and if there is anything else I can change please let me know.
     
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