Rejected Lemons n Lemonade-Easy

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Hey
baseballguy1230

First of all, I appreciate the work that went into this build

But there are a few things that I have critiques for

The build isnt the most attractive thing in the world but thats nothing you cant fix with a bit of practice!
Also in this screenshot here: http://prntscr.com/ox6l2f in the red you see a lot of floating parkour, it typically makes the parkour less attractive, along with the floating parkour, theres a whole bunch of repeating jumps!

The concept was nice but the execution could have been a bit more!

Have a nice day!

Nick
 

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Hey
baseballguy1230

First of all, I appreciate the work that went into this build

But there are a few things that I have critiques for

The build isnt the most attractive thing in the world but thats nothing you cant fix with a bit of practice!
Also in this screenshot here: http://prntscr.com/ox6l2f in the red you see a lot of floating parkour, it typically makes the parkour less attractive, along with the floating parkour, theres a whole bunch of repeating jumps!

The concept was nice but the execution could have been a bit more!

Have a nice day!

Nick
Also lemonade is already a theme of a parkour :/
 

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Hello baseballguy1230,

Unfortunately I will be Rejecting this map.
The theme isn't very original as there is already a lemonade themed map [LemonadePK - easy] The build is quite plain, I would recommend using different types of blocks in your builds to make them more attractive.
The parkour isn't that good. It's quite repetitive with a lot of single blocks and ladders. There are also a lot of floating jumps which makes the map overall look messy.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
 
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