Rejected MesaSunset- Medium

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The theme "Mesa" isn't original: Mesa - lolly0203

Too many jumps for medium.
At least to me, it doesn't remind me of a mesa biome, the only thing are the blocks that appear in that biome.

There are too many floaty jumps.
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recommend looking at the parkour criteria:https://www.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
I recommend looking at the list of parkours: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit?usp=sharing

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Hello Mads3,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, because as stated above, we already have one map with the same theme (Mesa.) Before making a map, you should refer to this link, which lists all the parkour maps that have already been made; https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit
The build is a bit flat; I would consider making it more three-dimensional, and since this is a biome theme I would make it larger so it looks like a full biome. I do love the color scheme. I also recommend using more variety with the blocks in your build.
The parkour is quite repetitive with the use of ladders. I recommend incorporating different jump styles throughout your entire map! You can look at recently accepted maps for some examples of these! The length of the map was good for the difficulty, although I do consider the difficulty of the jumps to be a little bit easy.

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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