Rejected Sewer Brewer - TheProTroller

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Builder : TheProTroller
ID : /plot V TheProTroller 3 ID: 85;-33
Difficulty : EASY
Number of Jumps: Roughly 45 or so
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Hello TheProTroller,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, as we do not currently have any sewer maps! (We do have one sewer dropper, but this is still original for a normal map,) so good job on that!
The build (on the inside) is accurate to how a sewer would look, which is great. However, the build does look a bit messy with blocks scattered everywhere (although sewers are messy, so maybe that's what you were going for?) I can tell that you put a good amount of effort into the build, so good job on that!
The parkour is a bit repetitive with the use of cobbles fences, wood fences, and stairs. Try to incorporate different styles of jumps throughout the entire map! You can look at recently accepted maps for some examples of these. The length and difficulty of the parkour are both better suited for the medium difficulty. I also feel like you should maybe consider adding a checkpoint after the first portion of cobbles.

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
 
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