Rejected Hearts submission - Hard

Status
Not open for further replies.
Joined
Feb 1, 2021
Posts
5
#1
Map name: Hearts
Map creator: poisonousx
Visit map: /plot v poisonousx 2
Jumps:64
checkpoints:5
pictures: files
also i am aware that it is mostly floating but what else can i do, other than spend ages making a wall floor and roof...
 

Attachments

49ersDude

Forum Expert
VIP+
49ersDude
49ersDude
VIP+
Joined
Dec 27, 2020
Posts
358
Ratings
95 10
#2
us a //wand bro
 

Acrellux

Forum God
ELITE
Acrellux
Acrellux
ELITE
Joined
Jul 28, 2020
Posts
5,050
Ratings
1,364 146
#3
You could make a main heart and put the parkour around it.

The parkour is repetitive based off of blocks, ladders, and glass. Try putting more varied parkour on the map!
1611610696615.png this is a color scheme you could use that would make varied parkour.

Also, the theme is taken, try aiming for a theme that isn't taken next time!

Acid
 

k_rissy

Forum God
PATRON+
k_rissy
k_rissy
Patron+
Joined
Jan 2, 2018
Posts
2,737
Ratings
1,319 25
#4
Hello poisonousx,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we have a map with the same theme (IceyHeart.) Before creating a map, please make sure that the theme has not already been done before by going here and clicking on the google doc in the thread: https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/
The build is decently accurate to what you were going for. However, it is quite messy since all of the structures are just floating, so please try to have a proper structure with lots of detail.
The parkour is varied quite a bit throughout, so well done there! The parkour is floating quite a bit (this goes with the build issue.) The length of the course is good for the hard difficulty; however, it is quite easy.

Thank you for submitting this map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
 
Status
Not open for further replies.