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Review c:
The theme :
Not really original theme, there is already some parkour using the Library theme (Library and Bookshelves ?)
If you want, i've do a thread about all already existing parkour with theme (I like self-promotion x)
The build :
Could be better, The beginning is quite empty, and there is not a lot of decoration
Try to added some pillar and more bookshelves at the beginning
Also, don't looks really good from the outside D:
The jumps :
There is no variation of jump, you put just normal jump, so add some ice/fence/ladder/soul sand...
The parkour is pretty boring and repetitive too, there is a lot of 4 blocks jump, try to diversify a bit your parkour !
Also I don't really understant this part :
Ok it's a bit hard but really easy with speed 2 or more (put invisible block
)
An other secret way here :
My opinion :
Not gonna be accepted, but if you decorate a bit your parkour and diversify a bit your jumps, there is maybe a chance !
Also, I am not a map judger, so the opinion of Txilsy or Shron can be different !
The theme :
Not really original theme, there is already some parkour using the Library theme (Library and Bookshelves ?)
If you want, i've do a thread about all already existing parkour with theme (I like self-promotion x)
The build :
Could be better, The beginning is quite empty, and there is not a lot of decoration
Try to added some pillar and more bookshelves at the beginning
Also, don't looks really good from the outside D:
The jumps :
There is no variation of jump, you put just normal jump, so add some ice/fence/ladder/soul sand...
The parkour is pretty boring and repetitive too, there is a lot of 4 blocks jump, try to diversify a bit your parkour !
Also I don't really understant this part :
Ok it's a bit hard but really easy with speed 2 or more (put invisible block
)
My opinion :
Not gonna be accepted, but if you decorate a bit your parkour and diversify a bit your jumps, there is maybe a chance !
Also, I am not a map judger, so the opinion of Txilsy or Shron can be different !
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Hello Donut
Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.
Shinxray has stated most of the things I am going to say before me, so I'd suggest looking at that as well for helpful tips. First off, the theme has been used before, not exactly the way you built it, but still. The build however, is not the most attractive. Make sure both the inside and outside look good. If needed, you can always ask other players for help and make sure to pick a theme where you can easily build a structure. The jumps are also really repetitive, make sure to have some variety to keep it interesting and yet challenging despite the difficulty.
Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one.
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.
Submission format: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
List of current maps/themes: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/#post-73063
Map difficulty guide: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/map-difficulty-guide.16797/
Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.
Shinxray has stated most of the things I am going to say before me, so I'd suggest looking at that as well for helpful tips. First off, the theme has been used before, not exactly the way you built it, but still. The build however, is not the most attractive. Make sure both the inside and outside look good. If needed, you can always ask other players for help and make sure to pick a theme where you can easily build a structure. The jumps are also really repetitive, make sure to have some variety to keep it interesting and yet challenging despite the difficulty.
Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one.
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.
Submission format: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
List of current maps/themes: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/#post-73063
Map difficulty guide: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/map-difficulty-guide.16797/
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