Hi there,
First of all, the theme of your map is pretty unoriginal, as I myself can recall seeing numerous "story" maps. Furthermore, the build of this map is pretty basic, and unnattractive, and the are a lot of maps with the same build. In addition to this, I believe you could have executed this theme better, but remember you can always re-submit your map. However, based on the photos you have provided I can see a variety of jumps, and I do like the concept of a "story", but overall the build of this map isn't great. -0
Good luck,
Allie