Rejected Parkour Submission (meduim)

[MrSnailGaming]

Theme: Bedwars!
Creator of map: MrSnailGaming
Plot: /plot visit MrSnailGaming 2
Difficulty: Meduim (or hard)
Extra notes:I have made one but an admin said to add more detail so I listened to him .
Photos:

 

[Ambibug]

Hi there Mrsnailgaming. I am sad to say I am going to deny your map. One reason being that the build as a whole is not that attractive, its just a lot of floating islands which we already have a lot of. However I did like some of the different types of jumps you used. If you choose to submit another map please hold back on the barrier blocks, there didn't need to be that many. Hope to see another map from you soon