Rejected Rainy days - Easy

[Nico8k]

Username: Nico8k
Who build the parkour: Nico8k
Map name: Rainy days
Pictures:

Plot name: Nico8k
Plot #: #1
Difficulty: Easy
Number of Jumps: ~26

 

[sapqhire]

Hello Nico8k,

Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme is fairly original, there is a map with a similar concept (Umbrella - Hard) but none exactly like this, which is good.
The build isn't great, it's hard to tell what it is, unless you know what the theme is. In the future, I would recommend trying to have a build that is a bit more descriptive of the theme, as this is mainly just a wool pillar with parkour underneath it. Also having a main build that is more reflective of your theme, means you can incorporate the parkour into the build a lot easier, avoiding having an excessive number of jumps floating around the void.
The parkour has some variety which is good, it did feel a bit repetitive though. Try to mix up your jumps a bit more throughout the map, and experiment with different ways you can utilise blocks, to create more original jumps.
The path of the parkour did feel a bit messy, and the barriers made it a bit confusing. This wasn't a huge issue, but it might be nicer in the future to have a bit more of a direct parkour path, to avoid players getting lost when completing the map.
The length and difficulty are good for an easy map.

Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.