Rejected Spongebob parkour map Submission :D

[Moxay]

• Username: ItzCakie
• Map name: Spongebob Parkour
• Photos of your Parkour:

• The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: /visit plot ItzCakie 2
• Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane): Easy,

 

[IPattyI]

Hey ItzCakie,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

• Theme: As we have already have a Spongebob-themed map currently on our server, this is a pretty unoriginally themed map submission. I recommend that you look at our list of previously used maps/themes as to prevent such things in the future: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
• Build: Personally, I don't think the build is very good. I say this because it looks incredibly similar to the Spongebob build in our map "Spongebob". We don't want similar builds on our map, so this is just not in an acceptable state. Also, the floating parkour does not do the build any favors.
• Parkour: The parkour was easy enough for the easy difficulty but it was a little too long for it, nothing too major. Although, it did have a bigger issue: lack of variety. The parkour was very repetitive, evidenced by the multiple segments where you'd do the same jump over and over again. You must remember to make your parkour as technically varied as possible so that it's fun to do. Be creative!

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck