Rejected Swimming - Easy

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how much jumps r there what diffaculty r there checkpoints even? we need more info pls read the manily to make pk maps :)
 
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how much jumps r there what diffaculty r there checkpoints even? we need more info pls read the manily to make pk maps :)
Hey just a heads up; jump count is optional :)
 

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G’day xOssyyy!
I regret to inform you that your map has been rejected!

The THEME of your map is an original concept, as there are no current maps that are of a specific ‘pool’ theme so good work!

The BUILD of your map however, is lacking in both detail and depth. When making a map, try to add as much detail and depth to ensure your map looks it’s best for players! Also add more dimension, shape and texture using different block types and colours to really accentuate the build!

The PARKOUR of your map is mainly floating, which isn’t accepted on ManaCube anymore. You must incorporate parkour into a ‘main build’ in order to avoid floating parkour jumps. Look in /warp beta for an idea of the parkour that has recently been accepted on mana! You didn't specify a difficulty but going off length and difficulty it fits an easy map the best! Finally, the blocks used for your jumps are unvaried with only ladders and blocks. To avoid this try using more variation to make your parkour more fun and less repetitive. This includes using blocks such as pistons, glass panes, water, ice, brewing stands and trapdoors as a few examples!

We hope to see more submissions from you in the future, take care! [McCrisp]
If you have any questions feel free to message me on discord at Elly#5555
Have a great day,
Elly
 
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