Right, I have tested your map and I will stay with my +1
here is what I like about your map:
Good:
The Parkour at the start of your map
I like this because it is unique and not done before!
Bad:
It is a bit of minimalism which could be made much bigger.
Overall Ratings:
Design: +1
Parkour: 0...
There are pros and cons.
Pros:
Original idea.
Nice, fun parkour.
Cons:
White wool is used to much. Mix it up a bit.
That shadow!
Therefore I will give a 0 Making the best of both worlds.
I must say the ear bits are a bit small! If you have quite big ears like me they won't fit! :) Joke aside, you need to present better to get a 0 or 1 from me.
-1
The teddy bear definitely could be better and like above the parkour is messy and also an eye soar. Sit down and plan out every aspect individually and how you want them to look. Then at least you know exactly what you are aiming to do. I hope this advice helps. Reply to me if you need further...