Rejected A new map

_xD_Dx_ · Jul 24, 2020

- Username: _xD_Dx_
- Map name: The Stone Rager
- Plot #: -104;-19
- Difficulty: Eazy(but its really hard)
- Jumps: 38
- The map:

Note: when I said "Eazy(but its really hard)" I meant that it's hard but it's not too many jumps.

atrail · Jul 24, 2020

yo, this is so good. Great theme and a lot of variation. This must have taken a While to make.

_xD_Dx_ · Jul 25, 2020

nah it really didnt

IPattyI · Jul 27, 2020

Hey _xD_Dx_,

Unfortunately, I will be REJECTING this map submission.

Theme: As we have an overabundance of Stone/Stronghold/Dungeon-related maps currently on our server, this is a very unoriginally themed map submission. I recommend that you look at our list of previously used maps/themes as to prevent such things in the future: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1lZKQZMgGev6fXyhZ8nCPkTzNIj0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit .
Build: Personally, I don't think the build is very good. For starters, sure, you portray the stone part of the theme, but is that really enough? Is that what you wanted? In my opinion, it's just a very poor attempt at conveying your theme. There wasn't a lot of effort put into it, it's just two floating empty stone rooms and floating stone parkour. You need to make a central build that exemplifies your theme and is attractive, this does not do that.
Parkour: The parkour was both easy and long enough for the easy difficulty. But, it was very repetitive as you utilized the same jumps throughout the map. For example, it was all basically just ladders, hh's, and simple 2b/3b stone jumps. You need to be more creative when incorporating blocks/jumps into your parkour, don't be afraid to experiment.

I hope you take these criticisms into consideration when submitting maps in the future, good luck