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Loading Status...Rejected Pagoda - Expert
- Thread starter VGAce
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Hello,
Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED. Here is my input:
Theme: The theme isn't original as there is already a Pagoda-themed map (Pagoda). Be sure to check the Parkour List before making/submitting a map to make sure that your theme is unique.
Build: The build is quite nice. I like the details on the ground and the height of the build. I would like some more detailing on the outer walls of the pagoda itself (the white wool to be specific).
Parkour: The parkour is the proper length of an EXPERT map, but much of the parkour is too easy. I would check some of the newer expert maps to get a feel for their difficulty in the future. The parkour is also very repetitive, being mostly ladders and/or red wool jumps with a few ice/slime/fence jumps sprinkled in - try to add more variety in your jumps by using blocks like anvils, heads, iron bars, brewing stands, flower pots, etc. to make your parkour more interesting and fun to play.
I hope to see more maps from you in the future, and have a great day!
Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED. Here is my input:
Theme: The theme isn't original as there is already a Pagoda-themed map (Pagoda). Be sure to check the Parkour List before making/submitting a map to make sure that your theme is unique.
Build: The build is quite nice. I like the details on the ground and the height of the build. I would like some more detailing on the outer walls of the pagoda itself (the white wool to be specific).
Parkour: The parkour is the proper length of an EXPERT map, but much of the parkour is too easy. I would check some of the newer expert maps to get a feel for their difficulty in the future. The parkour is also very repetitive, being mostly ladders and/or red wool jumps with a few ice/slime/fence jumps sprinkled in - try to add more variety in your jumps by using blocks like anvils, heads, iron bars, brewing stands, flower pots, etc. to make your parkour more interesting and fun to play.
I hope to see more maps from you in the future, and have a great day!
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