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Hey there, before going ahead with your map submission review I'd like to inform you that I'm only giving you my personal opinion/feedback on your parkour map submission and my personal feedback will certainly not affect your parkour map submission in the slightest, I recommend that you take in my feedback to improve your submission if there are any flaws, you don't need to and you're free to ignore me but anyhow, before going ahead I'd like to mention that I'm a Moderator not a Map Judge so this is just my personal opinion and I am not accepting or denying your parkour map as this is only my personal opinion.
Parkour theme/detail: For the detail section, you did a pretty decent job, I mean I guess it looks like an observatory which is great to see, for the theme I don't think I've ever seen a theme like this before so great job on that!
Parkour difficulty/variety: For the difficulty, I would say that It does match the Medium difficulty, unfortunately for your parkour variety you're really lacking in that, I would suggest adding more creative, unique and interesting parkour jumps, for example, flower pot jumps, water jumps, cactus jumps, etc.
Good luck!
Parkour theme/detail: For the detail section, you did a pretty decent job, I mean I guess it looks like an observatory which is great to see, for the theme I don't think I've ever seen a theme like this before so great job on that!
Parkour difficulty/variety: For the difficulty, I would say that It does match the Medium difficulty, unfortunately for your parkour variety you're really lacking in that, I would suggest adding more creative, unique and interesting parkour jumps, for example, flower pot jumps, water jumps, cactus jumps, etc.
Good luck!
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Hey there, before going ahead with your map submission review I'd like to inform you that I'm only giving you my personal opinion/feedback on your parkour map submission and my personal feedback will certainly not affect your parkour map submission in the slightest, I recommend that you take in my feedback to improve your submission if there are any flaws, you don't need to and you're free to ignore me but anyhow, before going ahead I'd like to mention that I'm a Moderator not a Map Judge so this is just my personal opinion and I am not accepting or denying your parkour map as this is only my personal opinion.
Parkour theme/detail: For the detail section, you did a pretty decent job, I mean I guess it looks like an observatory which is great to see, for the theme I don't think I've ever seen a theme like this before so great job on that!
Parkour difficulty/variety: For the difficulty, I would say that It does match the Medium difficulty, unfortunately for your parkour variety you're really lacking in that, I would suggest adding more creative, unique and interesting parkour jumps, for example, flower pot jumps, water jumps, cactus jumps, etc.
Good luck!
Parkour theme/detail: For the detail section, you did a pretty decent job, I mean I guess it looks like an observatory which is great to see, for the theme I don't think I've ever seen a theme like this before so great job on that!
Parkour difficulty/variety: For the difficulty, I would say that It does match the Medium difficulty, unfortunately for your parkour variety you're really lacking in that, I would suggest adding more creative, unique and interesting parkour jumps, for example, flower pot jumps, water jumps, cactus jumps, etc.
Good luck!
Hello The_Panda_Ruben,
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, because while we do have one Super Mario Galaxy map (GoodEggGalaxy,) The Comet Observatory certainly has not been done yet, so good job on that!
The build is accurate to what you were going for, and there are plenty of details to be seen throughout! I can tell that you put a lot of effort into this!
The parkour is the main concern. It is quite repetitive throughout with the use of mostly stone jumps. Try to incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! This may include; vines, lava, water, flower pots, cactus, and many more different types! The length is a bit long for a medium map, but the difficulty of the jumps works great, so good job on that!
Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is original, because while we do have one Super Mario Galaxy map (GoodEggGalaxy,) The Comet Observatory certainly has not been done yet, so good job on that!
The build is accurate to what you were going for, and there are plenty of details to be seen throughout! I can tell that you put a lot of effort into this!
The parkour is the main concern. It is quite repetitive throughout with the use of mostly stone jumps. Try to incorporate different jump styles throughout your entire map! This may include; vines, lava, water, flower pots, cactus, and many more different types! The length is a bit long for a medium map, but the difficulty of the jumps works great, so good job on that!
Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina
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