Rejected End Realm - Medium (updated)

[Pavle8]

Made by Pavle8
Map name: End Realm
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Difficulty: Medium
Jumps: Around 70


There are a lot of jumps for easy but they are not hard to do.
It's my first map, hope you like it!
I'm open to feedback.
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[curtis]

I really like this map! The parkour was fun and the build looks decent, although I'm not sure if the theme is original, but I dont feel like checking

 

[Dubinzi]

Giving this a +0

I've got really mixed feelings about this map. I love this style of map, but it feels like it belongs on another server meant for parkour racing, not for singleplayer casual parkour. The theme is obvious, but there isn't much detail to the builds. The map fits the easy difficulty, but it's too long compared to all of the other easy maps we already have. Also there's way too many barriers that aren't marked. Overall, though, the map was really fun to play, unfortunately this just doesn't feel like something that would be added.

My only suggestions are to add more detail to the build and to mark your barriers using item frames with barriers in them. Otherwise, good luck getting your map accepted. I look forward to seeing what you make in the future.

 

[Pavle8]

Giving this a +0

I've got really mixed feelings about this map. I love this style of map, but it feels like it belongs on another server meant for parkour racing, not for singleplayer casual parkour. The theme is obvious, but there isn't much detail to the builds. The map fits the easy difficulty, but it's too long compared to all of the other easy maps we already have. Also there's way too many barriers that aren't marked. Overall, though, the map was really fun to play, unfortunately this just doesn't feel like something that would be added.

My only suggestions are to add more detail to the build and to mark your barriers using item frames with barriers in them. Otherwise, good luck getting your map accepted. I look forward to seeing what you make in the future.

Thanks, i fixed most of the things you said. (im just not a good builder)

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Pavle8,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we have several maps relating to The End (EnderSkip, EndTower, EndPortal.)
The build is a bit messy; I recommend having the structures in this map more organized. I do think the use of clay and sea lanterns was unique, so good job on that! The build also feels a bit blocky; try having different 3D shapes in your map.
The parkour is a bit repetitive; I recommend using different jump styles throughout the entire map. You can look at recently accepted maps for some examples of these! The jumps were too easy for a medium map, and also too long. I'd make a few jumps harder and reduce the length of the map!

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina