Rejected Gameshow - Medium

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/plot teleport turnorp 1
Builders - turnorp, mylocalkmart
Name - Gameshow
Difficulty - Medium
Minimum 40 jumps, 3 checkpoints.
This parkour is stylized as a gameshow, where you have to complete three challenges in consecutive order before reaching the goal. It's slightly longer than most medium maps, and includes a small parkour-themed puzzle.

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Hello,

I regret to inform you that your map is REJECTED.

The THEME of your map is original, so good job on that!

The BUILD of your map is a problem. The map is entirely made up of 3D pixel art and floating parkour, which is no longer accepted on ManaCube. Next time try considering creating one large main build with lots of depth and detail. If you wanted to stick to the theme, maybe recreate a gameshow interior.

The PARKOUR fits the length and difficulty of a medium map, so good job on that! While it did have some interesting components, your parkour was lacking variance. You used alot of regular blocks/jumps which caused a more repetitive feel. To add more variance, try adding more jumps with unique blocks like pots, water, heads, vines, etc. I would look at recently accepted maps to see what we are wanting!

Thank you for taking the time to create a map, I hope to see more submissions from you in the future.
If you have any questions feel free to reach out to me on discord at Elly#5555
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