Rejected Journey; Medium/Hard

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I used white stained glass instead of barrier block because I wasn't sure how to access them. Also the map goes pretty far down and I don't know if that's a problem.
I built it all by myself so that's all I can really give you about builders
The map ID is -5;97 and the plot name is also Journey
I hope it is good enough, thank you.
 

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Hey! I just wanted to tell you that you should have one MAIN BUILD instead of many other builds! It makes it less messy!
 

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Hello TECNOgames,

I regret to inform you this map is being rejected. There are many, many biome and dimension themed maps on ManaCube already, so the theme is very unoriginal. Please check the Parkour Themes list before building a map to make sure your theme is original: https://docs.google.com/document/d/...0yOjXjUTDvfzKNzl4/edit#heading=h.mwzvk07fxty2
The build is also a bit messy and odd, with the huge white glass barrier cutting through everything. Try to make a map with one main build with the parkour attached onto or inside the build. You can look at recently accepted maps for examples of this!

The parkour is mostly floating, which contributes to the messiness of the build. It is also very easily exploitable: http://prntscr.com/sv62y1 the green arrow shows the proper path, while the purple arrows show the massive exploit. I would recommend building maps upward to avoid easy exploits!

The parkour is also not varied or mixed, comprised mostly of normal blocks for the jumps, with a few fences and walls mixed in. Try to use many interesting blocks and jump types in your map to make a unique and interesting course.

One last note, please make sure you read the Map Submission Format before submitting a map: https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ I was able to find your map because of the screenshots included, but I have no clue what the difficulty is! Please follow this format next time so I have all the necessary information I need to judge the map.

Thank you for submitting this map! If you have any questions, please feel free to message me here on the forums, in-game, or on Discord.
 
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