Rejected lodin da fish washer - Easy

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BlackBird552

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So you basically like, take the fish and put them inside a washing machine. Pretty epic if you ask me.

Username: BlackBird552
Map name: lodin da fish washer
Plot: -81;-92
Difficulty: Easy
Number of jumps: 35


EDIT: With the help of other mappers, the PK has been changed. The images now can only serve a suggestive purpose of how the map sort of looks like.
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Hayleyx

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Hello!

Unfortunately, your map is being REJECTED.
The theme is original to an extent; however the name of your map itself will need to be changed.

The build itself is lacking shaping and details. The fish themselves are very block-y and lack depth. The block colour-palette of the washer itself does not aesthetically pleasing. Try using a different block palette and re-shape the map overall.

The parkour itself fits the length and difficulty for the most part; so good job on that! The parkour itself felt repetitive and all-over the place in terms of variations. There were some variation clumps (mainly normal jumps). You can remove these clumps by adding more variation. This will spice up your parkour a little more too.

We hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Have a good day/night
-Hayley
 
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