Accepted Pier - Easy

[PyroTortilla]

Username - PyroTortilla
Map name - Pier
Photos of your Parkour -
https://prnt.sc/v9uest
https://prnt.sc/v9uf03
https://prnt.sc/v9uf55

Plot - /plot v PyroIsGoodBrotha
Difficulty - Easy
Number of jumps - 22 excluding some filler jumps, 2 checkpoints (the whole end is failsafe to a degree)

Some notes:
Tbh, I was never really expecting to submit this, I just made a build in like an hour and decided why not build some parkour for it. I did my best to incorporate the parkour into the build (seeing as it's flat as heck) and block off all skips, let me know if you find anything. I already nerfed it a bit but if you think there's any other jumps that need nerfing, feel free to yell at me in the comments.

 

[BDOsborne]

Username - PyroTortilla
Map name - Pier
Photos of your Parkour -
https://prnt.sc/v9uest
https://prnt.sc/v9uf03
https://prnt.sc/v9uf55

Plot - /plot v PyroIsGoodBrotha
Difficulty - Easy
Number of jumps - 22 excluding some filler jumps, 2 checkpoints (the whole end is failsafe to a degree)

Some notes:
Tbh, I was never really expecting to submit this, I just made a build in like an hour and decided why not build some parkour for it. I did my best to incorporate the parkour into the build (seeing as it's flat as heck) and block off all skips, let me know if you find anything. I already nerfed it a bit but if you think there's any other jumps that need nerfing, feel free to yell at me in the comments.

the only critiscm that may come to pass with other map judges is the thme clash? idk perhaps having the beach as the shore line doesnt help this aspect. idk
anyways cute build !

 

[GamersDecision]

Solid map Pyro! Here's a review.

The theme is troubling. While I believe a pier has not been done yet, which is good I also believe that this map has a slight beach aesthetic and theme to it which is very unoriginal. I don't know how big of an issue this is to the Map Judges, but I believe it could be a little problematic. Maybe not!

The build is good. You made a great pier, that looks like a proper pier. It's a well done from me!

The parkour is okay. It was decently enjoyable, and mostly fit the Easy difficulty. I believe it could have a better flow to it as right now there are a few parts where the player has to stop and kind of crawl around slowly. It's not a huge problem however! I believe it could also be slightly nerfed from a few parts to perfectly fit the Easy difficulty.

There's a shortcut as well!

See that brewing stand? You can jump on the barriers and and use the slime from there, to skip the water and the cobble walls!

As always, remember that my opinion does not affect the judging results. I'm just trying to give advice that I feel like would help the map's chances of being accepted, and helps the map's enjoyability! You don't have to change anything I suggest you to change!

Good luck!

 

[PyroTortilla]

As always, remember that my opinion does not affect the judging results. I'm just trying to give advice that I feel like would help the map's chances of being accepted, and helps the map's enjoyability! You don't have to change anything I suggest you to change!

Good luck!

Sounds good lol

 

[PyroTortilla]

Will patch the skip when I get on later today and look over ways to improve flow/make minor nerfs

Edit: Nerfed the jump to the anvil near the beginning and changed the final jump from a fence to a head, and patched the skip

 

[ovur]

Really cute build! It looks quite fun!

 

[Quinny]

Hello Pyro,

I am happy to tell you this map is being accepted! While the beach theme is not original, no other beach theme has a pier, so I would say that the execution of the theme is original. The build really nice! I like the amount of details added to the pier that make it feel lively. For an easy map, it's very fun to explore and take a quick look around. It's clear that a lot of effort was put into the map. Good job!

The parkour fits the easy difficulty, is varied and mixed, and overall fun to play. Thank you for adding in directional signs where discussed. The path is a lot easier to follow now, which was the only concern with the parkour. Not much to say about it, nice work.

Thank you for submitting this map! If you have any questions, feel free to message me on Discord. Hope to see more maps from you soon!