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Hello MonkeyHQ,
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are many maps already related to Pokemon, however there aren't any exactly like this. Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build is good, it's accurate to the theme and well built. All I would suggest is possibly using different blocks in each colour, rather than just using one coloured wool, however pokeballs are quite simple so what you have done is accurate.
The parkour has some variety which is good, however there were a few repetitive sections, especially at the start. Try to keep the consistency of jump variation throughout the entire map.
A lot of the parkour is floating. Try to have one or two main builds in your map, and implement the parkour into that, rather than having many smaller builds, as having an excessive number of jumps floating around the build and the void can make your map look a bit messy.
The difficulty is good for a hard map, but the length is too long. Please read over this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ to make sure your map fits within the requirements.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
Unfortunately, I will be Rejecting your map.
The theme isn't original, as there are many maps already related to Pokemon, however there aren't any exactly like this. Please refer to the document in this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/ to make sure your map idea is original.
The build is good, it's accurate to the theme and well built. All I would suggest is possibly using different blocks in each colour, rather than just using one coloured wool, however pokeballs are quite simple so what you have done is accurate.
The parkour has some variety which is good, however there were a few repetitive sections, especially at the start. Try to keep the consistency of jump variation throughout the entire map.
A lot of the parkour is floating. Try to have one or two main builds in your map, and implement the parkour into that, rather than having many smaller builds, as having an excessive number of jumps floating around the build and the void can make your map look a bit messy.
The difficulty is good for a hard map, but the length is too long. Please read over this thread - https://manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/ to make sure your map fits within the requirements.
Thanks for submitting your map! I hope to see more maps from you in the future.
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