Rejected Race To Rapunzel (EASY)

[Proteges]

• Username TheProTroller
• Map name: Race To Rapunzel
• Photos of your Parkour

• The # of your Plot / or warp name to it: ID = 59;-78, Owner: TheProTroller
• Difficulty (Easy, Medium, Hard, Expert, Insane) EASY
• Number of jumps (Optional) roughly 36 jumps..

 

[Tas]

This is a really great build! Unfortunately we already have a Rapunzel map, but I hope that doesn't affect this submission too much. Good luck!

 

[Cogsworth]

Amazing build! Like @Tasses said we do already have a rapunzel map... Otherwise everything else seems to be perfect.

 

[Proteges]

I appreciate the positive feedback

 

[Dubinzi]

Giving this a -1

Unfortunately this map has many of the same issues as the last map you submitted.

Positives:

• The build is good

Negatives:

• The parkour is floating a lot
• The parkour is mostly made of regular blocks and some ladders, so there isn't much jump variation
• The terrain is still messy, it was clearly made with //brush sphere grass 3, then poorly smoothed out.

Suggestions:

• Remake the parkour so it has more interesting jumps and variation
• Make less floating parkour, preferably none.
• Remake the surrounding terrain

Good luck!

 

[k_rissy]

Hello TheProTroller,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
The theme is unoriginal, as we already have a map relating to Rapunzel and her tower (Rapunzel'sTower.)
The build is attractive and well-done, with lots of details, and it is also accurate to the original thing, so good job on that!
The parkour is slightly varied, but it is quite repetitive in certain spots. Try incorporating different jump styles throughout the whole map. You can look at recently accepted maps for examples of these! The parkour was also mostly floating (unattached to the build,) which makes the parkour look messy. There were certain spots that were a bit tricky for an easy map! (Also, make sure you include a proper ending to your map! [In your case, green wool with a pressure plate])

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina