Rejected Tournament Of Power | Hard (Resubmission)

[Rhett Robin]

Rhett_Robin, Hard Difficulty. 76 Jumps, /plot v Rhett_Robin 2, 5 Checkpoints. Process: hand built, 7-8 hours.
Tournament arena from dragon ball super: https://www.google.com/imgres?imgurl=https://vignette.wikia.nocookie.net/dragonball/images/f/f6/Tournament_of_Power_Arena.png/revision/latest?cb=20170620194430&imgrefurl=https://dragonball.fandom.com/wiki/Tournament_of_Power&docid=p5aAgZ3qgww48M&tbnid=VWVtPpzYhIYhBM:&vet=10ahUKEwixxOGKtOvmAhUMZc0KHZrYCrsQMwhzKAEwAQ..i&w=1280&h=738&safe=active&bih=663&biw=1366&q=tournament of power&ved=0ahUKEwixxOGKtOvmAhUMZc0KHZrYCrsQMwhzKAEwAQ&iact=mrc&uact=8

Jiren: https://www.google.com/url?sa=i&source=images&cd=&ved=2ahUKEwiq66u-tOvmAhXWHc0KHdpfBMIQjRx6BAgBEAQ&url=https://dragonball.fandom.com/wiki/Jiren&psig=AOvVaw0E8rZIEvuJvtnhYXK_vmuM&ust=1578277628536286

Changes: Completely remade parkour to blend in with the build opposed to floating blocks to carry you to the other section. Jiren added at the back of the stage to accomplish this. The amount of floating jumps has been reduced down to about 9 though I could not entirely avoid floating jumps.

 

[k_rissy]

Hello Rhett_Robin,

I regret to inform you that your map is being rejected.
As mentioned in your previous submission, the theme is slightly unoriginal in the Dragon Ball Z concept, but the execution is very unique, so good job on that!
The build is the main concern here. It does look neater than your previous submission, which is great. However, please note that we no longer accept maps with pixel art as a primary focus. The reason for this is that pixel art is highly unoriginal, and it is seen a lot in our earlier maps.
The parkour has improved immensely! There is a decent amount of variety, so good job on that! There are still floating jumps, but those are inevitable given your theme. It does fit the hard difficulty! My only concern with your parkour is that it is a bit confusing at certain points (mostly the underground part) so consider adding some signs so players know where to go.

Thank you for submitting your map, I would love to see more submissions from you!
Have a nice day,
Kristina