Rejected Ancient Pillars: Easy 20-30 jumps

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Ancient pillars is based on a ancient flying city that was lost to the void, escape this by avoiding all mossy obstacles while the beneath is gripping to your warn out feet.


map difficulty: EASY (Short)
Made by: G_stringNut
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-1 theme is unoriginal and floating jumps are bad for your health.
 

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Too Many Floating Jumps. (Shinx Hates Floating Jumps)
The Theme is... Interesting.
Also There is suppose to be a Main Build.

I Wish You Good Luck! :)
 

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Seems very well built, unfortunately yeah it's all floating which isn't original.

Also @EzGirlPvP_X you know Shinx isn't the only map judge, right? It's not that he hates them, it's that they're not good.
 

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Hello G_stringnut,
I will give your map a -1, the theme is not original, as there are medieval maps, I don´t know if I would even count this as a theme. The build is not really good, but I believe it will look better with just more detail. Also the jumps are repetitive and a little bit messy, the whole map was based on 2 types of jumps.
¡Good luck!
 

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Hoi G_stringNut,
Sorry to tell you that your map have been rejected.
The theme is not really interesting, because there is already some maps with a very similar theme as your's. The build is not really good too, it's really messy because there is a lot of floating blocks a bit everywhere, making your map less attractive, please try to make your parkour on/in one main build. The parkour could be better, it's a bit varied, but maybe a bit repetitive (There is a lot of soul sand at the start for example, try to not only use them in a row, but try to vary the blocks for every jumps).

Thanks for submitting your map, would be really good to see more maps from you !
 
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