Rejected Hay Sisters - Medium

[Blurpyfied]

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Haybale - Medium
/plot home carazypumpkin9 11
3 Checkpoints
56 Jumps
All Jumps are possible.
Pictures:



Edit: I am the best at H1Z1. Try and fight me and you DIE!!!

 

[JiggleJigglePop]

this looks boring

 

[PancakezRule5]

-1, Not much detail was put into this

 

[peachay]

The build is a bit boring (as said above) and overall it just looks unattractive. Also, is Hay Sisters the name of the map? However, the theme is original (I don’t recall seeing a hay bale map). The theme could probably have been executed better (you could have added some more hay bales, some animals, a barn?)
-0
Gl though!

 

[JakeNoot]

uhhhh i don’t think mr. charles (@Drakonixal) would approve of this...

In all seriousness, this map, from the picture, seems rushed and somewhat boring. I’ll look at the map once I’m able to get online, but for now I’ll be leaving a -1 due to the visible build of the map.

 

[Blurpyfied]

uhhhh i don’t think mr. charles (@Drakonixal) would approve of this...

In all seriousness, this map, from the picture, seems rushed and somewhat boring. I’ll look at the map once I’m able to get online, but for now I’ll be leaving a -1 due to the visible build of the map.

it wasnt rushed xD it took a while to get the map in the correct shape as of world edit was glitching on my single player world so i had to do it here instead.

 

[Juandacun]

maybe more decoration, i like pk btw +1

 

[Appledestroyer]

sotp making maps unless skill and hardwurk was used in the making

 

[Dark88]

Honestly, I don’t think this is going to be accepted, I’m sorry Noah, maybe spend more time on them? But for now it’s going to be a -1 sorry, but gl though!

 

[taylorisbasic]

-1 uglier than me and it looks like it took 5 minutes to build. if it took you any more than 5 minutes, you must be really bad at building.

 

[Appledestroyer]

Be4 you say we are hating on you making unfair judgemeants,you should reflect and think why you have 14 rejected closed threads and then make a map on your reflecion.

 

[JakeNoot]

Be4 you say we are hating on you making unfair judgemeants,you should reflect and think why you have 14 rejected closed threads and then make a map on your reflecion.

i spat my water out lmfao

 

[lolol]

-1 Not much detail put into this at all, the build could be made in one minute with worldedit, but the parkour doesn't totally suck (And of course I see this right when I was about to build a hay map)

 

[Wizolo]

Ugly but the pk is good +0

 

[Drakonixal]

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Haybale - Medium
/plot home carazypumpkin9 11
3 Checkpoints
56 Jumps
All Jumps are possible.
Pictures:

looks like a trash can with trash inside of it, was shoved into a trash can then submitted by a trash can -.-

 

[MoneyMiser]

I have to agree with many of the statements above. You don't reach the majority of the requirements for a good parkour map. It does look fun & it seems very creative but at the same time it looks lazy and I think more effort should be put into this. Especially you need a lot more jumps in order to have a successful parkour map. If you fix these issues I am sure it will be a great parkour map in the future! As of now i'm rating this a -1 Good Luck!

 

[taylorisbasic]

I have to agree with many of the statements above. You don't reach the majority of the requirements for a good parkour map. It does look fun & it seems very creative but at the same time it looks lazy and I think more effort should be put into this. Especially you need a lot more jumps in order to have a successful parkour map. If you fix these issues I am sure it will be a great parkour map in the future! As of now i'm rating this a -1 Good Luck!

wtf arent you like 10 how is your grammar so good

 

[JakeNoot]

wtf arent you like 10 how is your grammar so good

I’m like 10, have you seen my grammar?

Also, he has lots of punctuation errors in his paragraph, as long as lots of run on sentences. Not the best grammar, in my opinion.

 

[taylorisbasic]

I’m like 10, have you seen my grammar?

Also, he has lots of punctuation errors in his paragraph, as long as lots of run on sentences. Not the best grammar, in my opinion.

pretty good for an actual 10 year old tho ( also, just because youre as short as a 10 year old, it doesn mean you are a 10 year old ): )

 

[JakeNoot]

pretty good for an actual 10 year old tho ( also, just because youre as short as a 10 year old, it doesn mean you are a 10 year old ): )

lOL