Rejected Telephone - Hard

[mel]

Creators: Paragraphed & pandalmao
Difficulty: Hard
Name: Telephone
Plot: ./Plot home pandalmao 2
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[Txilsy]

Hai you two,

Thanks for submitting your map! I've come to inform you that this map will be rejected.

The theme is nice and original, but the build is not as appealing. It lacks detail, even though you can still tell what the build and theme is. The course does suit the difficulty but there is still a lack in variety, making the course uninteresting and overall a bit boring. I hope you know what I mean by this. I'd recommend picking a different theme next time as this one doesn't seem to be working out.

Thanks again for submitting, we'd love to see another map sometime soon, so don't hesitate on making and submitting another one.
Also, if you have any questions or concerns, just PM me here on the forums or on Discord.

Submission format: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/must-read-map-submission-information-format.649/
List of current maps/themes: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/parkour-list-with-theme.20194/#post-73063
Map difficulty guide: http://forums.manacube.com/threads/map-difficulty-guide.16797/